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Jan 21Edited

Like a lot of things, isn't AI in this instance less breaking presentations than revealing they were already broken?

One of my a-ha moments, a long time ago, was doing a course on presentations based on the Kipper technique [https://garethbunn.wordpress.com/2018/03/22/the-kipper-technique-for-real/], which is based on Cicero's "De Oratore". There's a lot of good stuff here, but the key thing is the focus on rhetoric. There are great examples of rhetoric done well. Lincoln's Gettysburg Address is probably the purest example. Also Churchill's "We shall fight on the beaches" or MLK's "I Have a Dream".

Somewhere in the last 100 years we've forgotten that presentations are fundamentally rhetoric—you're trying to move an audience from point A to point B. Cicero knew this cold: structure your argument, know it so well you can deliver it without notes, and only then consider what visual aids (if any) actually support that work.

Modern slide decks have become a cargo cult—we think having slides *is* presenting, when really they're just a crutch for people who haven't done the intellectual work of building an actual argument.

AI is just accelerating this: take a bunch of stuff, dump into narrative, generate slides, read from screen.

Once you see presentations through Cicero's lens, you can't unsee how hollow most of them are. TED talks strike you as vapid entertainment—no meat to them. They're optimised for looking like great rhetoric—the confident stride, the headset mic, the perfectly timed pause, the 'surprising' statistic on a slide—but most of them have no actual argument. They're performance without persuasion. You get a vague 'idea worth spreading' that's usually just a feel-good observation or a cherry-picked anecdote dressed up as insight.

Your students are lucky you're teaching them the structure first—that's the only way slides ever become useful rather than parasitic. Most people never learn the difference.

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High school English teacher here. You raise excellent points and questions. A few things I've tried this year: (1) saying you can have a slideshow but it's images and videos only, (2) being more prescriptive about what your presentation notes can look like - minimal notes as cues only rather than a script to read from, perhaps one handwritten page or half a page typed, and (3) checking students' recall of their material by having them handwrite in response to the key questions they were trying to answer in their presentation, but do this the class day *after* the presentation with no notes - I tell them this is additional information for me about their understanding and can only help them.

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